THE BLIND PERSON
I walked into the library and my dog Martha turned me left. According to my sister Ariel, she is gray. I felt a table [I an guessing] and almost bumped into it as Martha turned me the other way.
I wasn't always like this. I was only blind after a horrible accident. Anyway, I felt around for a book and picked one up. Good thing it was in my language. It read: "Twilight" I think. I still didn't completely get the whole language.
Next thing I know I am bumping into someone. My Martha barked. Was she angry? I heard slow footsteps walking away. I guess I will never know. Martha walked a little bit farther and stopped. This means there is a chair or something to sit down on. I sat. I felt around. Was that a computer? I haven't been on one of those since the accident. I felt the mouse and moved it. I heard it ding and felt excited.
Martha barked and I told her it would be okay. Or at least I thought it was her! "What would?!" said a deep voice. It must be a boy.
"Noooottthhhiiinnng!". I dragged out the word.
"okay" said the voice. "WELL SEE YOU".
This trip just got officially weird. I left with Martha.
the end
This is a really nice story, but I think you should had more details, like- how did the trip get weird?Was it because stranger was talking to you?- why did you leave and not see what was going on that made it so weird?
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