Wednesday, February 4, 2015

THIS STUPID COMPUTER

                                        
                      
      
This Lumpy Computer

It jams 
It crashes down
The clicks of the DELL

The light of the bottom of the mouse 
*Flicker*
Blinds ALL
That turns it around

How do I turn this piece of junk on? 
BEEP BEEP BEEP
BANG
AAAH!
What did I do?

That is IT
BLAM! 
I'm getting a Mac.

 -Lily Cohen





       
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2 comments:

  1. UnknownFebruary 4, 2015 at 12:54 PM

    Ha! I really like this poem. I can hear your writers voice and feel the anger you express. Great job!

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  2. JillianFebruary 4, 2015 at 2:02 PM

    Such a great title, Lily. I love the use of lumpy to describe a computer. This is such a funny poem. And so many great examples of onomatopoeia!

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