Wednesday, February 4, 2015

Taylor's Onomatonpoeia Poem

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By Taylor Smith

Boom 
Pow 
Crack
It fills the air
The sounds of war every where
Woowoo
The train is bearing down
And it's not gonna stop until it hits hard ground
He blows the whistle 
Shouts aloud
Move out the way or you're be plowed

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2 comments:

  1. UnknownFebruary 4, 2015 at 12:58 PM

    COOL!!! Your poem is very interesting, and I liked all of the rhymes and stuff. Deep and beautiful.

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  2. JillianFebruary 4, 2015 at 2:20 PM

    Very intense, Taylor. The pace and the rhyme scheme really help me feel the pressure of the situation in the poem. Nice work!

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