Wednesday, February 25, 2015

Preformance poem

HUNGER

So many people
So much food 
But the people...
that have all the food
decide that they want to keep it all.

All those people 
who need the food
and all the people
who have the food 

The rich have all their 5 star meals
The poor barely even have food
But it doesn't matter does it?

4 comments:

  1. I can hear the voice strongly in this poem. Great job!

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  2. I feel what you feel whej i read this poem. it has that sort of power on a peron. Really good!

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  3. I feel what you feel whej i read this poem. it has that sort of power on a peron. Really good!

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  4. Really great work, Nyk. You have identified one of the major problems of our time, and your surprising, dismissive ending really drives home what a heartbreaking problem, one with a solution you also present, this is.

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