Bright blue eyes within
Trees, buildings, shadows the same
Everly shadows
The careful spring air
Buds popping and sprouting out
The orchestra sings
The monster stepped out
From the dark and lurks beneath
Turned on the flashlight
Noisy kids’ chaos
Oh, oh the noise noise noise noise!
Quiet settling
Don’t touch the white tile!
Science is your worst subject!
Failed! Level 18
Study Hall’s mourning
The next and most amazing
Miss Lucy Meissner
These are fantastic, Lucy. If I had to pick a favorite I think I'd go with the second one for the way you made me associate the beginning of spring and the sounds of an orchestra. It really creates a full scene in just a few lines. Also, your last haiku is very funny. I like the bold voice :)
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