LIFE
Life is like the sky
one day it is amazing and easy
the next day it is
DARK
and
STORMY
DARK
and
STORMY
Life is like nature
a period of time
the plants are fine
Life is like death
sometimes its short
sometimes its
LONG.
SNOW
Snow is a nice bed with a pillow an blanket
To some its the poison of blood
to some it is a free drink of water to stay hydrated
others is a way to find shelter
but in all in all
SNOW
is a
MYSTICAL THING
SNOW
Snow is a nice bed with a pillow an blanket
To some its the poison of blood
to some it is a free drink of water to stay hydrated
others is a way to find shelter
but in all in all
SNOW
is a
MYSTICAL THING
i hope u like my poem send me a email plz
ReplyDeleteI won't email you but I like ur poem a lot!
DeleteGood poem:) Very sophisticated writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletethnx so much my email is cheasetastegood@gmail.com
Deletevery strong
ReplyDeletethnx
DeleteThere's a name for what you've done here, did you know that? It's called Concrete Poetry. It means that you're not just writing the poem with your words, but also with the shape. Here's some more info: http://www.poetry4kids.com/blog/news/how-to-write-a-concrete-poem/
ReplyDeletethankyou so much miss lang i hope to have some more poetry fun
ReplyDeletelike your poem a lot, like that u used your own words ;)
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